Tuesday, December 11, 2018
The Big Day
Who
Driver person (best man) going to be late for wedding day.
What
Man is driving a Volkswagen Jetta VR6 toward a wedding. He panics, but makes it to the wedding just in time.
wet road, rural out in country: car racing, moving in quick pace
windshield wipers: rainy or wet weather
driver= name wipes brow: nervous, stressed, anxious.
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bride getting married: wedding dress and veil. Bridesmaids all wear same uniform
Priest is there wearing robe and book
Bride= "glowing", smiling
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straight road with lines of trees
driver not slowing dow
gripping wheel
intense, concentrated focus
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man= wearing a suit with flower = dad??= not content but observing bride
gets stopped by trailer.
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man still going fast
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bride twisting her ring= concerned face
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man is checking watch
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man looks at his watch
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man slows down to trailer, seriously? face, switch lanes
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road next to beach
then bridge
then farmland from tunnel
(seems rlly far)
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bride look at window with concerned face
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man get stopped by train
puts head down
screams
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door shuts
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church
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bride sees driver, looks away suddenly, groom looks while bride looks down
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man is shocked
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When
2001
Why
Man is going to be late for a wedding.
How
Man drives Volkswagen Jetta and is going really fast.
A person is driving a Volkswagen Jetta VR6, late for a wedding that took place around 2000-2018. As the wedding progresses, time passes, and the driver starts panicking. He encounters multiple obstacles, such as having to slow down due to a trailer in front of him, and having to stop for the train to pass by. However, he keeps driving, and makes it just in time for the groom and bride to meet face-to-face.
Story (make up names and quotes)(try to be most factual)(can go further, must begin with stry)
Jason Hill was driving along a wet road, the windshield wipers moving across his Volkswagen VR6. He was driving towards a wedding in 2001. Hill is in the farmlands, while the wedding awaited him inside a church. It's a long distance between the two locations, and Hill was zooming along the road.
Hill's speed was 80 miles per hour on the wet road. He wiped his brow.
"I was rushing, because the wedding was far, far away. I was getting stressed, hoping that I'd make it in time, Hill said.
The bride, Sarah Farmer, already wearing her wedding gown and veil, was being perfected by her bridesmaids.
"I was already in the church, and was excited for the big day. I knew Jason was going to arrive a bit late, so I focused on wearing the dress and looking my best," Farmer said.
Jason, driving his Volkswagen VR6, zoomed down the straight road ahead of him. His hand gripped the wheel.
"At this point, I knew that I had to pick up the pace. I definitely knew I was going to be late if I went my usual speed, so I concentrated on driving. I was hoping for a miracle to happen." Hill said.
Farmer's father, Bill Farmer, sat in front of Farmer. He observed the dress to make sure Farmer looked perfect. He didn't find declare any flaws in the dress, but he checked his watched with concern.
"Sarah looked beautiful. I was content with how she looked, but Jason still wasn't here. I was afraid my daughter's groom wouldn't make it in time," Bill said.
Sarah twisted her ring, and looked out the window.
"Jason still wasn't here, and I was concerned. I was worried that he wouldn't arrive in time like he said he would," Sarah said.
Finally, the groom, Jason Hill arrived. His Volkswagen VR6 had taken him from farmland to church, just in time for the groom and the bride to meet.
"I was relieved that I actually made it [to the wedding]. I was a bit proud to have accomplished this feat, but I still needed to get to the wedding," Hill said.
Jason met the bride, but there was already another groom. As the other groom looked at Jason, Sarah's face look down with embarrassment.
"I was shocked, and angered, and confused. I didn't know what happened, until Sarah explained later on. We are dealing with the issue now. I'm still upset," Hill said.
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